Jeffy the Giraffe
In the middle of a hot sunny jungle I can see green trees and a scared baby giraffe called Jeffy.
He was running through the beautiful rainforest while he was looking at the wonderful clear sun rise. There were monkeys swinging on the vines above him and colourful
lizards climbing up the tree and the fresh wind blowing in his face and the fresh water dripping from tall trees on his fluffy fur.
As Jeffy was wandering around the rainforest something caught his eye it was a lion in a pouncing position. The lion leapt from the green grass and started to chase
after Jeffy.
Jeffy ran and ran, the lion was on Jeffy's tail. He couldn't run anymore he saw a tree and ran up it and then the lion was trying to get up the tree after him. But he couldn't for a few minutes he was sitting hoping he wouldn't come down but Jeffy didn't come down and then the lion walked away with a growl.
Jeffy was holding on so hard his hands were starting to get numb he was crying for help he started to slip off. He could see the monkeys swing on the vines but they wouldn't. Jeffy was sad he gave up all hope. But jeffy could here growling a big huge massive Gorilla carefully took jeffy of the big tree. and then the girilla ran away. The end
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WOW Codi-Jae, I love your story, so much detail, you set the scene beautifully with lots of descriptive words, well done. I was really scared for Jeffy you filled your story with drama and it was enjoyable to read. Just check your capital letters for names next time and for the word I. Well done Codi-Jae you should be very proud. Michelle
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