hi readers this is my free writing for this week hope you enjoy
Tuesday, November 16, 2021
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Hi Codi-Jae
ReplyDeleteI liked how you gave the reader some background info about what the jobs were for the four boys, that was pretty funny. After that your story became quite suspenseful & I was left wondering what was going to happen when they went back into the water for a second time. Reminder for next time to do a format check of your story before blogging. Great work!